I fixed it lol
Bro idk but if I were you I would add like some animals or anything arguing over the beat that would be dope!!
Not bad at all ...is unique in its own way...I found the melody interesting in between good and eh...meaning is alright! I like that telephone sound is pretty cool!
Keep it up no matter what anyone says!
Don't like the beginning..bad frequencies involved..
I do like the transitions!
However lower the hi hats a bit and amp up the melody a bit !
Dynamic range is important!
Other than that I do like the track really smooth and relaxing!!
IMO also around 3:00 make the melody louder a bit make it punch through!
Very great intro has that kind of scary vibe...
Drums are well organized, smooth transitions..
Everything in the mix is well suited they fit well with each other
Great job bro!!!
Thank you! Everything worked as planned
In my opinion the mix is good vocals are good... just that idk if is me but would have been cool if the voice was more harmonized..everything else is great but I feel like you should put more emotion into it.
Bro tbh out of all your songs I heard I think imo this one is the best you have done. You gotten better I see.
I just want to post that I got wrecked lol
Maybe next year!!
Not exactly the best place to post that, but...okay!
Nevertheless, I do hope that you'll give it another go next year. xD
WIsh my songs were dope like this one...remember if you like it then it's good..now I personally like it...keep it up.
Just a happy little Chiptune, but I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the feedback.
Music, just like everything else, is completely subjective. There will always be folks that don't like a particular genre or track, but hopefully more who do. The best thing to do is just make the music that YOU want to make! Anything else is a bonus.
Unless you're doing it professionally for a client. Then make what they want.
Smooth and relaxing with a refined touch of happiness.. IMO you should of added more tension !
But still great!! Keep it up!
Thanks for another quick review! For the most part, I wanted the music to reflect the art that it was inspired by, which translates into a more relaxed and mysterious vibe. There is a moment of increased tension there near the end, though! Glad you enjoyed it.
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